重写句子: The two screws were missing from the assembly kit. The two screws held the bicycle frame together. (Complex sentence)

重写句子: The pipes had frozen. The heat had gone off. We phoned the plumber, He couldn't come for two days. He had been swamped with emergency calls. (Compound-Complex sentence)

重写句子:You should strive to cooperate with your colleagues to bring about change. You should strive to cooperate with your colleagues to improve communication. You should strive to cooperate with your colleagues to further professional development. (Parallel structure)

重写句子:The sun went down. We stayed on the beach. (Complex sentence)

重写句子: The clerk wouldn’t sell the outdoor grill to me. It was the food sample. (Complex sentence)

修改句子: All the chocolate candies had a purplish tinge as a result, she was afraid to eat any.

修改句子: Clyde took his son to the children’s zoo at the shopping center both of them enjoyed petting the goats, lambs, and fawns.

修改句子: Tony hated going to a new barber he was afraid his hair would be butchered.

修改句子: Today Pam got a call from James Wood. A boy that she had dated in high school. She agreed to have lunch with him. Although she had no intention of breaking off with her present boyfriend.

修改句子:Some students show through body language that they don’t want to get involved in a class. Hiding in the back or in a corner. But by sitting where you can have eye contact with teachers. You can make a favorable impression on them.